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As technology advanced, crime rate decreased, while crime techniques improved.
Technological advances led to fewer crimes, while crime techniques improved.
To begin with, developed equipment prevented crime.
These days, CCTV are everywhere, and mature people act gently in conflict situations
since they are aware of the CCTV.
This,therefore, leads people to raise psychological obstacles to initiating violence.
Furthermore, high-tech mobile device provides instant communication when a crime is occurs.
During the days when there was no improved mobile device, the officers had to carry
a waki-toki which has the disadvantage of having the wrong frequency, the danger of wiretapping
and lack of battery. Nowadays,however,smart phone simultaneous information exchange
can swiftly confine criminals when used properly.
In spite of the benefits of a safe society, personal privacy is expected to be invaded.
Consider if every coner has been surrouded by spy cameras and you would constantly be observed.
Undoubtedly, this would incur people to become mentally ill
in comparison with a society that is unmonitored,which may protect their privacy.
In conclude,preventing cirminal acts and rapid response to crimes are positive aspects of developement.
But ruining personal lives must be abated.
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