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활동 vs 컴퓨터 건강,휴식
Since the advent of the home computer,peoples’ lifestyles have been affected.
At first ,creative activities develop brain function.
Spending time outside the normal routine can provide unusual stimulation to the flesh;
this leads to a conjunctive neuron synthesis in the brain that illuminates a previously unexplored region.
AS a result, the maximal uses of the brain,one can live a more fulfilling life.
Although the convenience of accessing computers cannot be overlooked,exercise is expected to improve one’s health. Running until our body gets exhausted grows muscles; a strengthened body enhances the immune system which protects against invasion of bacteria or viruses.
Despite initial optimism it is evident that the computer is a powerful tool for relaxation.There are only three requirements: electricity,internet and computer. By clicking,it is easy to travel the world in comparison with realistic travel that requires a great deal of time and money.Computers can provide a variety of relaxing methods at modest prices.
In conclusion, creative activities elevate the quality of one’s life.But, with a computer,it is irrefutable,the convenience is nonnegotiable.
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